My trip with my family <-- Title Case ... My Trip with My ... We planned<<went on a short visit to Edmonton and Kelowna with my family. First, we went to Edmonton and we visitTense the largest shopping mall >that was the largest in North America and the 10th largest in the world. It called<is called "West Edmonton Mall."<<no quotation marks We found a lot of attractions places. They have<<, including (Galaxy land, an ice skating rink, cinema complex, restaurants, water world with water slides, wave pool, brand name of stores, kids play area,no comma) etc.The place is huge and busy. We enjoy this place very much specially the kids, they like the Galaxy land and the water park. It's a great Mall to find something to wear,comma splice I found hundreds of stores. I bought dress'sdresses, shoes'sshoes and jewelry's. West Edmonton Mall is a good place to eat. The Mall haveSVA all kind of restaurants. We had a great lunch toat Joey's sea food restaurant<<Joey's Seafood Restaurant with my family.1spaceIt is a fun place to spend your weekend with your family and friends. We made our Second trip to Kelowna. We drove from Edmonton to Jasper for 4 hours. It was long and boring, but travailing from Jasper to Kelowna is 7 hours and it was beautiful.Specially the road was especially amazing because it is between the high mountainsRun-on sentence it was covered with the long tress and water. There are a lot of wild animals that live on the mountains and in the forest. like< , like bears, deer, moose, wapiti, mountain goats, and wolves. ( Bears, Deer, Moose, Wapiti (Elk), Mountains Goat, Wolf.) etc. We saw aBear, a Wapiti and a Mountain Golf on the roadcomma and we took a<some beautiful pictures. After we saw the animalscomma we drove very safely<carefully, especially on<inthe slower zone, because sometimes you can even see the<<there are animals crossing the road. I loved our trip to Kelowna because I saw an amazing color full water, water fall, big mountains covered with snow and trees, +and wild animals. I took a lot of photos of the amazing? natural scenery. We stoppast tense to<at Athbasca Falls and to Sunwapta Falls tosaw<base form the beautiful waters. There was<plural a lot of tourists and some people are camping there. We took<had nice road trip. It was fun. After our long driving, finally we arrived in<at our hotel in Kelowna. I was tired, but happy and exited. In the morning we went to see Downtown Marina kelowna. It was very beautiful, especially>> specially the Okanaganlake. There are docks and renting<rental boats in downtown. I enjoypast tense walking around, eating my ice cream. We stayed all day on the beach.1spaceWe made<had a picnic and I buildpast tense a sand castle with my daughter. They have<<There was a splashpad nearby. kids playground with water. My kids was<were very happy. It iswas a great place for family fun. There are so many things to see and to do in Kelowna's city park, e.g. walking, cycling, running, swimming, skating, playing volleyball. (walk, cycle, run, swim, skate, volleyball, playing to the water park) and so much more! it's a great place to relax and enjoy your self. We had agreat time. It was an unforgettable week with my family's.